
You’ve gotten a rough draft of your motivational letter ready, and have filled in all the other relevant information. In many cases however, you can be in for an ugly surprise when you realize that universities ask for a SEPARATE financial statement for the sole purpose of awarding you financial aid. Worry not, the MHPC is here to guide you through this maze of statement-writing to please the admissions & financial aid committees. Given below are some pointers to keep in mind while setting out to draft your essay, and you’ll be just fine:
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Write an introduction. Develop a thesis statement. Outline your academic and career goals. Indicate the main categories you will address in your statement. Describe how your academic record, work experience and community service have lead you towards your goals.
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Describe your academic record and any challenging courses you may have taken. Any skills you may have acquired outside of your mains study will be a plus, as will be any volunteer projects or research in which you may have undertaken.
For example: “I graduated from my undergraduate institution with a 4.0 GPA. I majored in Elementary Education and Spanish, with a minor in Sociology. I applied for and received a prestigious internship working with the state government on developing educational policies.”
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Communicate your leadership skills. Describe how your work experience has taught you how to interact with a variety of different people. Affirm how your educational experiences have taught you to overcome obstacles and face challenges. Describe how life experiences have motivated you to continue your education and given you a clear vision of your future.
For example: “My parents moved our family to this country from Albania when I was 12 years old. I did not speak any English when we arrived. The ESL teachers in my school helped me to be successful in school, and I want to do the same for other students in my circumstances.”
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Explain your community service history. Emphasize active participation in clubs, organizations, or civic associations Explain how you chose your community service projects and how long your involvement was. Also talk about your travel experiences and how your interactions with different cultures have broadened your horizons.
For example: “Each summer, I volunteer for the Migrant Workers Education Association in Chester County, Pennsylvania. They service migrant workers who come here from Mexico to work on mushroom farms. We not only link families with community services, but we also tutor children in English and help them learn important school skills that will allow them to be successful in school.”
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Illustrate how your past experience has imparted qualities that the scholarship committee will value. Describe the qualities you have developed as a result of your academic, work and community service experience. For example, your academic experience may have given you motivation, knowledge of your current field and an attention to detail. Your work experience may have given you originality, creativity and an ability to solve problems. Your community service experience may have given you maturity, emotional stability and the ability to face challenges.
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Choose your words carefully. Strike the right balance between being modest and bragging. Be genuine with your abilities with phrases like “good candidate,” “well-prepared,” and “good leadership skills.” Avoid presumptuous statements like “my fantastic background,” or “my eternal passion for learning.” Present clear evidence of your skills and accomplishments. The evidence will speak for itself.
With this article (and another one on writing a Statement of Purpose, check that out too!), you have all the tools ready to unleash your creativity and verse upon the word document…before you edit it thrice more. Let us know whether these tips have been helpful for you!
-Nimisha, PR Team








